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#21 Posted : Tuesday, August 10, 2010 2:25:49 AM
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my appologies to anyone reading the above essay, it seems I was mistaken in the history of Albert Einstein... In the essay I wrote that he failed his first year mathematics exams, when it was actually an entrance exam to get into university that he failed (due to his dropping out of high school).
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Teachers must accept partial responsibility for the failure of any of their students.

Write a unified essay in which you perform the following tasks. Explain what you think the above statement means. Describe a specific situation in which a teacher might justifiably not accept some responsibility for the failure of a student. Discuss what you think determines whether or not teachers should accept some responsibility for the failure of one of their students.


A teachers job is not only to educate children, but to teach them how to love to learn. A good teacher can take a subject that a child hates and show them how interesting and amazing it can be. A student fails when their marks are low but their ability to learn is high. In private schools, employers have the funds necessary to hire teachers that will install a passion for education into the minds of children, and help them by keeping class sizes small. Each teacher must take into consideration the subject they are teaching and how best to teach the information to the class they have that year. If the class size is small, then the teacher should be able to find a way to relay information and install a passion for learning. A failure of a child at that point becomes a failure of the teacher, as the child has no reason to not be able to learn.

However, in the public sector of schooling, class sizes and politics often hinder the process of teaching. Even an amazing teacher will have trouble reaching out to thirty-two students in one day. At the same time, the politics of teachers union often hinder the teaching process. Teachers are given extra time each day to prepare and plan for classes, but the time that they spend away from the classroom may also mean that the class has more time to fool around, as teacher assistants (who take over when the teacher is out) often have less control over classes. Therefore, when class sizes are large and politics interfere, teachers might not have to accept responsibility for their students failures.

In conclusion, a teachers responsibility for their students failures vary from situation to situation. A teacher's first priority must be to install a love for education into their children, and much time and effort is involved in the process. In public schools, teachers may be justified in not taking responsibility for their students failures, as class sizes can be quite large, and time away from the classroom can mean disruption in the teaching schedule. In the private sector, when class sizes are smaller and there are fewer interuptions in the working day, teachers must take some responsibility for their students failures. All in all, class sizes and time restraints are the determining factors when considering whether teachers should take responsibility for their students failures.


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#23 Posted : Tuesday, August 10, 2010 5:24:29 AM
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One way to succeed in life is through the process of education. Teachers, being one of the main component of a sound and progressive of society, have roles to pass on important knonwledge and values to the young people. For instance, it is thier duty to ensure that students have thorough understanding of the material presented. If students fail in understanding and performing certain tasks, then it must be partially teacher's fault based on their inability to teach effectively. Thus, teachers must improve thier teaching quality to ensure that students who are willing to learn do not suffer from unintentional failure. For example, a recent study shows that almost 50% of Ontario students in grade 9 have difficulty passing math. This is largely due to the lack of preparation at the elementary level. Some elementary math teachers neither explain the concept clearly nor use visual presentation. As a result, students who wish to learn did not understand math fully, which have built weak foundations for high school math. Therefore, teachers should take partial responsibility for the student's failures as they taught math poorly.

However, there are situations where teachers do not have any responsibility for the failure of their students. This often occurs when students lack sufficient effort in learning. For example, in University, students have equal opportunities to succeed. Professors only have the task to teach materials presented in class, but it is ultimately students' responsibility to fully understand and apply them by attending review sessions or asking questions. Also, a professor does not have the responsibility to ensure every individual in the class pass the course. If a student fails to understand and perform well, it is because of lack of effort the student had, not professor's teaching quality.

So who is to blame? The debate of whether teachers have partial responsibility for the failure of thier students is difficult to resolve. Nevertheless, it is dependent on a student' effort. When a student is willing to learn, sufficient effort will be given; thus teachers are responsible if such student performs poorly. The quality of the teaching skill needs to be questioned. When a student does not have enough effort in learning, teachers cannot force such student to learn, like in University. Hence, poor performance do not relate to teachers, but to the students themselves.

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#24 Posted : Wednesday, August 11, 2010 2:00:08 AM
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-Good supporting paragraph, but try to be a little more concise.
-Great refuting paragraph.
-Good resolution, but again, try to be concise.
-P.S. A reminder that there are more free MCAT study aids at http://www.premed101.com.../showthread.php?t=44117

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It can be said that education has the capacity to provide students with many opportunities later on in life. Teachers play a large role in providing students with the education needed to pursue these opportunities. When a student fails to successfully pursue an opportunity, responsibility of the failure is quickly cast upon the teacher. Educational providers are somewhat responsible for the failure of their students; this is true early on in a student’s educational journey. During kindergarten and elementary school, children are just beginning to discover what the world has to offer and their minds are just beginning to flourish. Children depend on their teachers to help them successfully learn new and important concepts because their minds do not have the capacity to direct their own learning. At these early stages it is the responsibility of the teacher to educate each and every one of their students about the fundamental life skills, such as numeracy, literacy and communication. The provincial government of Ontario has implemented standardized testing for all grade three and six students to ensure that students were learning understanding fundamental literacy and numeracy concepts. It is the responsibility of the teacher to make sure that he or she not only teaches the content of the exam but that each student fully understands and is comfortable with these concepts. .If a student is struggling with one of these basic concepts it is the responsibility of the educational provider to see that the students needs are addressed. Implementing new teaching strategies, providing extra help, having meetings with parents, are all options the teacher should use to make sure that his or her students are succeeding in the classroom. The responsibility of a student’s failure in the early years of their education should be cast on the teacher because he or she is responsible fore teaching fundamental skills that students are unable to learn without direction from an educational provider.

Although teachers do play a large role in the success of their students, a teacher cannot always take the blame for the failures of their students. By late high school and university students have acquired fundamental literacy, numeracy and communication skills. Success is no longer dependent on how well a teacher teaches their students but how well the student is able to understand the information and apply this information to real life situations. A lot of learning in these later years is self directed; students must now take a larger ownership for their educational success and make sure they are doing what they need to succeed. Teachers and professors provide students with the information they need, but it is up to the student to make sure they understand the information. Doing homework, studying for tests and exams, asking for extra help to clarify misunderstood concepts are all necessary for educational success in these later years. If a teacher notices that a student fails to complete their homework, does not study for tests and fails to seek extra help when they have offered it, the responsibility of failure can no longer be placed on the teacher, but must be placed on the student.

The deciding factor of when a teacher should take responsibility for the failure of his or her students is not trivial. However, after much thought it can be generalized that a teachers responsibility of a students failure is dependent on education level. In the early years of education, kindergarten to elementary school, children depend on the direction of their teachers in order to learn fundamental skills that they will need the rest of their lives. Educational providers should do what ever is possible to ensure that none of their students fall behind. However, in high school and university the responsibility of failure shifts from the teacher to the student. In these later years, educational success is not only dependent on the teacher but on the student. The student must put in the hard work and take responsibility for his or her education. It is up to the student to ask for extra help if they need it because education at this level is largely self-directed. Education is an important aspect of our society and teachers and students need to work together in order for it to be truly successful.

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-Good supporting paragraph. However, you spent a lot of time telling me what a good teacher schould do, when you should have put more effort in to telling my why they have a responsibility.
-Good refuting paragraph.
-Good resolution. Could have used one more sentence to sum up the essay.
-P.S. A reminder that there are more free MCAT study aids at http://www.premed101.com.../showthread.php?t=44117

defeoluc wrote:
From the moment a child reaches an appropriate age for public education, the teachers become a big part of their lives. Students will spend on average five days a week, roughly six hours a day in the classroom from the time they are around 6 years old. This leaves the students with lots of exposure to a teacher, whom has an inherent responsibility to provide a safe and nourishing environment, and ultimately has a major role in the child’s future successes. Therefore, at least partial responsibility for a student’s failure must be acknowledged and accepted by the respective teacher. The teacher’s responsibility is very apparent in early childhood education, mainly elementary school and to a lesser extent secondary school. This point in a student’s education is critical to their future; however it is also the least apparent to the young student. As a teacher, a main focus of their efforts should be to the discipline and positive reinforcement of a student to build the foundation for a self perpetuating education in later years. It is in the early educational years where effort should be put into ensuring the students have good study habits, and are learning the fundamental skills in order to allow them to be competitive in a demanding post secondary world. Without this proper teaching, students will gain bad habits that will impede their progress throughout the rest of their education. Therefore, teachers should ensure that each student be started on an equal playing field, and a failure to teach students the proper skills should, in part, rest on the shoulders of that teacher.

This issue takes a turn, however, once the student reaches post secondary education. At this point the student is faced with more freedom and decisions then ever before. Assuming that the student has been taught the skills necessary to succeed in post secondary education, then the responsibility for failure is now with the student. In university, students may feel hidden in class sizes ranging from hundreds to thousands.
Often time’s attendance is not mandatory, and it takes a diligent student to attend all classes and put in the best effort, especially when no one is keeping track. Sometimes, this freedom will be a downfall to a student, and will be evident through academic performance. In this situation the responsibility cannot be put on the professors because of the large class sizes, the responsibility lies solely in the hands of the student.

Teacher responsibility is a tough issue to resolve. However, is seems apparent that during early childhood education, such as elementary and secondary school, that teachers have a far greater responsibility for a students failures. Students are at an age where they must learn the necessary skills to help them succeed later on in their education. The focus shifts once the student has reached post secondary education, and is entitled to greater freedoms. At this point the student must realize the importance of the education and must take full responsibility for their successes or failures.


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-Good supporting paragraph.
-Your refuting paragraph is good, but it is difficult to tease out what your argument is. It would have been better to be more general and say something like "factors outside of the teachers control," rather that it was because of her "inherent method of thinking"
-Good resolution, but it may have been better ot be more general that "the way their mind processes information." It is just not as applicable.
-P.S. A reminder that there are more free MCAT study aids at http://www.premed101.com.../showthread.php?t=44117

jblom wrote:
As President Barak Obama once said, "education is the cornerstone of a successful society". This fact has presented true in the ability of nations with strict education guidelines to become economic superpowers in the world. For example, law in Canada,one of the top 8 ecnomically sound nations (as represented by their membership in the G8), states that students must remain in school until their 18th birthday. As a result of this, students often spend more time with their teachers than they do their parents. In effect, teachers become role models for successful citizens in society. It is the responsibility of these teachers to ensure that students learn knowledge required to move to the next grade of school. Teachers must engage their students in learning. Failure of students to move to the next level of education is therefore representative of a partial failure of their teachers to ensure that the student achieve academic success. A prime example of the failure of university professors to engage their students in active learning is the story of Albert Einstein. Considered one of the most brilliant physicists of all time, one would expect that Einstein would be capable of achieving passing grades in his first year undergraduate courses. However, due to lack of motivation and an un-engaging classroom environment, Einstein failed his first year mathematics courses. In this case, Einstein's teachers must assume some responsibility for Einstein's academic failure, since clearly he had the mental capacity to understand the required material and given the right learning environment he may have achieved passing grades in his classes.

Although teachers make large imprints in the lives of their students, they are not always responsibile for a student's academic failure. The North American education system is modeled after the minds of University professors and PhDs who thrive in an "academic" environment. However, the system often does not take into account those who's minds function in a different way, and who may thrive in subject areas not highly recognized by their "academic" courses. For example, Gillian Lynne, one of the most famous coreographers in Broadway history (recognized by her works Cats and The Phantom
of the Opera), was once considered an "academic failure". As a seven year old, Lynne's teacher expressed serious concern to her mother due to her inability to sit still in class, and resulting failing grades. After a visit to the doctor's office, Lynne's doctor realized that Lynne's mind was engineered in a way that differed from the majority of the population. Her mind relied more exclusively on creativity and spacial relations. As a result of guidance from her doctor, Lynne's mother placed her in a school for dance, and Lynne grew to become a world renowned dancer, never mind a multimillionaire. In this case, it is clear that Lynne's school teacher was taking a vested interest in Lynne, rather than ignoring her problems. However, there was nothing that the teacher could have done to help her. It was not the teacher's "fault" that Lynne was failing her tests;
rather, Lynne's "academic" failure resulted from her inherent method of thinking.

Who is to decide whether teachers should accept responsibility for the failure of their students? As adult role models, teachers must try to engage their students in active learning. However, a teacher cannot always find a way to help a student
in need. In the case, such as that of Albert Einstein, where a students failure is based not on their inherent abilities, but rather on the education system they have been placed in, it must be the teacher, who has not guided them in the proper learning methods, who must accept responsibility for their failure. However, when a student continues to fail in the education system they have been placed in due to inherent differences in the way their mind processes information, teachers should not be held responsible.

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-Your supporting argument is ok. Your example is just very vague and hinges around a "passion for learning." It works, just not the best.
-Your refuting argument is too complex. You want to argue one issue. Your presented information to argue about public schools, class size and politics. Keep it simple. Choose one and leave out the rest.
-Your resolution is appropriate given your arguments.
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Kalie wrote:
Teachers must accept partial responsibility for the failure of any of their students.

Write a unified essay in which you perform the following tasks. Explain what you think the above statement means. Describe a specific situation in which a teacher might justifiably not accept some responsibility for the failure of a student. Discuss what you think determines whether or not teachers should accept some responsibility for the failure of one of their students.


A teachers job is not only to educate children, but to teach them how to love to learn. A good teacher can take a subject that a child hates and show them how interesting and amazing it can be. A student fails when their marks are low but their ability to learn is high. In private schools, employers have the funds necessary to hire teachers that will install a passion for education into the minds of children, and help them by keeping class sizes small. Each teacher must take into consideration the subject they are teaching and how best to teach the information to the class they have that year. If the class size is small, then the teacher should be able to find a way to relay information and install a passion for learning. A failure of a child at that point becomes a failure of the teacher, as the child has no reason to not be able to learn.

However, in the public sector of schooling, class sizes and politics often hinder the process of teaching. Even an amazing teacher will have trouble reaching out to thirty-two students in one day. At the same time, the politics of teachers union often hinder the teaching process. Teachers are given extra time each day to prepare and plan for classes, but the time that they spend away from the classroom may also mean that the class has more time to fool around, as teacher assistants (who take over when the teacher is out) often have less control over classes. Therefore, when class sizes are large and politics interfere, teachers might not have to accept responsibility for their students failures.

In conclusion, a teachers responsibility for their students failures vary from situation to situation. A teacher's first priority must be to install a love for education into their children, and much time and effort is involved in the process. In public schools, teachers may be justified in not taking responsibility for their students failures, as class sizes can be quite large, and time away from the classroom can mean disruption in the teaching schedule. In the private sector, when class sizes are smaller and there are fewer interuptions in the working day, teachers must take some responsibility for their students failures. All in all, class sizes and time restraints are the determining factors when considering whether teachers should take responsibility for their students failures.


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-Good supporting paragraph.
-Good refuting paragraph
-Good resolution.
-Try exploring your examples in more detail.
-P.S. A reminder that there are more free MCAT study aids at http://www.premed101.com.../showthread.php?t=44117

tulipgirl wrote:

One way to succeed in life is through the process of education. Teachers, being one of the main component of a sound and progressive of society, have roles to pass on important knonwledge and values to the young people. For instance, it is thier duty to ensure that students have thorough understanding of the material presented. If students fail in understanding and performing certain tasks, then it must be partially teacher's fault based on their inability to teach effectively. Thus, teachers must improve thier teaching quality to ensure that students who are willing to learn do not suffer from unintentional failure. For example, a recent study shows that almost 50% of Ontario students in grade 9 have difficulty passing math. This is largely due to the lack of preparation at the elementary level. Some elementary math teachers neither explain the concept clearly nor use visual presentation. As a result, students who wish to learn did not understand math fully, which have built weak foundations for high school math. Therefore, teachers should take partial responsibility for the student's failures as they taught math poorly.

However, there are situations where teachers do not have any responsibility for the failure of their students. This often occurs when students lack sufficient effort in learning. For example, in University, students have equal opportunities to succeed. Professors only have the task to teach materials presented in class, but it is ultimately students' responsibility to fully understand and apply them by attending review sessions or asking questions. Also, a professor does not have the responsibility to ensure every individual in the class pass the course. If a student fails to understand and perform well, it is because of lack of effort the student had, not professor's teaching quality.

So who is to blame? The debate of whether teachers have partial responsibility for the failure of thier students is difficult to resolve. Nevertheless, it is dependent on a student' effort. When a student is willing to learn, sufficient effort will be given; thus teachers are responsible if such student performs poorly. The quality of the teaching skill needs to be questioned. When a student does not have enough effort in learning, teachers cannot force such student to learn, like in University. Hence, poor performance do not relate to teachers, but to the students themselves.


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Hey Chris, I had emailed you my essay a while back but haven't gotten anything so I'm not too sure if it worked. Here it is.

Education is one of the most important journeys in somebody’s life. Being enrolled in school introduces you to new people, new values, talents, and a wide variety of interests. If it were not for the teachers and school board, this wonderful experience of attending school would not exist. Teachers are responsible for teaching their students the appropriate material for the specific class and doing their best to ensure that their students pass. Thus, if a student fails a class and must retake it, a teacher may have to accept some of the responsibility for that failure. If a teacher does not make that extra effort to help out a struggling student out of class time, or if the material is not taught in a very understandable way, partial fault may be attributed to the actual instructor. This fault can be determined through the teacher’s methods and ability to distribute the material in an appropriate manner.

However, there are certainly times when the teacher is not justifiably responsible for the failure of one of their students. When the instructor personally does everything he/she can to ensure the best results for their students, there may be other reasons that exist for the low grades. The responsibility of a student’s failure can therefore be attributed completely to the students themselves. If a student refuses to attend classes or finish the appropriate homework, it is not the responsibility of the teacher to continually chase them down and babysit them. A student must be willing to learn and complete the tasks a typical scholar would have to do in order to pass a class.

When then does a teacher have to accept some of the responsibility for one of their student’s failures? It will depend on the amount of effort put in by the teacher in comparison to the student’s attitude. A teacher who does not value the success of every one of their students and therefore does not put in enough effort in and out of the classroom will have to accept some of the responsibility for a student’s failure. It is their job to teach the material in a way that everybody can understand and to help out whenever possible. On the other hand, when a teacher performs all of their specific jobs exceptionally well along with spending extra time outside of the classroom, the teacher may not be at fault. The student may have to accept full responsibility for their actions if they do not show initiative to pass the class and move forward academically.
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The mind of a child is often descirbed as a blank canvas and education is the paint brush which provides the foundation for their minds as they become adults. If such analogy holds true, it is reasonable to claim that teachers are partially responsible for their students' failure. It should be clarified that education in this scenerio is not restricted to the concept of an academic system, life experiences should count as a form of education and in the same manner, a teacher is not an instructor of a classroom but a person who is willing to advise another person with information that they deemed helpful. Real life problems often consist of reoccurring issues which can be solved with advices from an experienced instructor or recalling past solutions from personal experiences. Therefore, a teacher who fails to teach his student Galileo's hypothesis-based experiments is at fault when his students fails to design scientifically sound experiments. The New York state school board has recongized the teachers' responsiblity on ensuring their students' success that up to 25% of a teachers' salary is based on their students' performances in standardized testing.

However, there are scenerios which a teacher cannot be held responsible for their students' failure. In fields which relies heavily on creativity, a teacher can only provide the basic tools for the students to make their creative ideas into reality but it is incorrect to suggest that a student's lack of creativity can be blamed on the teacher. An art instructor can teach a student to paint and even provide the students with subjects for their paintings but it is ultimately the student's creative abilities to arrange the objects in a creative way which capture onlookers' attention. Therefore, one rarely hears artists lament their failures on their mentors and teachers. In a recent survey of Ontario College of Art and Design's graduating class, 85% were satisfied with their undergraduate education but many grads failed to secure employment or internships upon graduation. Thus these art graduates did not blame their past education for their lack of success in finding employment.

In scenerios where repetition and past knowledge is the basis for success, such as standardized testing, a teacher can be held responsible for his students' failures as seen with the New York school board. In situations where creative and new ideas is the basis for success, such as the design and art industry, a teacher should not be held responsible for his students' failures. In the art and design field, a teacher should only be held accountable for the basic tools he has taught his students to turn their creative ideas into innovative objects.
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