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Score: 4/6 -Good supporting paragraph. -Your refuting paragraph is good, but it is difficult to tease out what your argument is. It would have been better to be more general and say something like "factors outside of the teachers control," rather that it was because of her "inherent method of thinking" -Good resolution, but it may have been better ot be more general that "the way their mind processes information." It is just not as applicable. -P.S. A reminder that there are more free MCAT study aids at http://www.premed101.com.../showthread.php?t=44117
jblom wrote:As President Barak Obama once said, "education is the cornerstone of a successful society". This fact has presented true in the ability of nations with strict education guidelines to become economic superpowers in the world. For example, law in Canada,one of the top 8 ecnomically sound nations (as represented by their membership in the G8), states that students must remain in school until their 18th birthday. As a result of this, students often spend more time with their teachers than they do their parents. In effect, teachers become role models for successful citizens in society. It is the responsibility of these teachers to ensure that students learn knowledge required to move to the next grade of school. Teachers must engage their students in learning. Failure of students to move to the next level of education is therefore representative of a partial failure of their teachers to ensure that the student achieve academic success. A prime example of the failure of university professors to engage their students in active learning is the story of Albert Einstein. Considered one of the most brilliant physicists of all time, one would expect that Einstein would be capable of achieving passing grades in his first year undergraduate courses. However, due to lack of motivation and an un-engaging classroom environment, Einstein failed his first year mathematics courses. In this case, Einstein's teachers must assume some responsibility for Einstein's academic failure, since clearly he had the mental capacity to understand the required material and given the right learning environment he may have achieved passing grades in his classes.
Although teachers make large imprints in the lives of their students, they are not always responsibile for a student's academic failure. The North American education system is modeled after the minds of University professors and PhDs who thrive in an "academic" environment. However, the system often does not take into account those who's minds function in a different way, and who may thrive in subject areas not highly recognized by their "academic" courses. For example, Gillian Lynne, one of the most famous coreographers in Broadway history (recognized by her works Cats and The Phantom of the Opera), was once considered an "academic failure". As a seven year old, Lynne's teacher expressed serious concern to her mother due to her inability to sit still in class, and resulting failing grades. After a visit to the doctor's office, Lynne's doctor realized that Lynne's mind was engineered in a way that differed from the majority of the population. Her mind relied more exclusively on creativity and spacial relations. As a result of guidance from her doctor, Lynne's mother placed her in a school for dance, and Lynne grew to become a world renowned dancer, never mind a multimillionaire. In this case, it is clear that Lynne's school teacher was taking a vested interest in Lynne, rather than ignoring her problems. However, there was nothing that the teacher could have done to help her. It was not the teacher's "fault" that Lynne was failing her tests; rather, Lynne's "academic" failure resulted from her inherent method of thinking.
Who is to decide whether teachers should accept responsibility for the failure of their students? As adult role models, teachers must try to engage their students in active learning. However, a teacher cannot always find a way to help a student in need. In the case, such as that of Albert Einstein, where a students failure is based not on their inherent abilities, but rather on the education system they have been placed in, it must be the teacher, who has not guided them in the proper learning methods, who must accept responsibility for their failure. However, when a student continues to fail in the education system they have been placed in due to inherent differences in the way their mind processes information, teachers should not be held responsible.
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