Score:1/6
-Great intro sentence. A good hook.
-When you paraphrase the prompt, you must do so in a way that is less absolute. You can't say "television has greater influence on our society than written forms of media such as books and newsprint" because in your next paragraph you are going to tell me how books influence more than TV.
-Your supporting example is risky. For one, it is very general and two, I don't think that it is true. Regardless, after you state an example you should also relate it back to your argument in the next sentence.
-Your refuting paragraph has a point "books influence more if preciseness is required." However, this needs to be echoed throughout the paragraph. You need a stronger example. Don't start the paragraph talking about how"there are instances which books are a preferred form of communication medium over the television set." Preferred medium is not what you are arguing, it is all about influence.
-You do not state a resolution principle. You tell me why TV has more influence and say nothing of books. The purpose of this paragraph is to come up with a rule for when a TV or a Book exerts more influence.
ChanC wrote:"Video killed the Radio Star"
is a classic lyric from MTV's first music video. The accurancy of this statement is uncanny considering that performers and muscians reach the pinnacle of their popularity by having their music broadcast on television. It illustrates that one form of media can indeed make another form of media obsolete. Television has greater influence on our society than written forms of media such as books and newsprint. Influence on people or society should be defined as the ability of a communcation media's content to alter the genral public's thinking and its ability to grab the public's attention. According to the stated defintion, televisions would have a greater influence than books because the genral public can quickly recount the plot of the best selling movie of all time, Titanic; whereas it is much more difficult to find a person who can provide an accurate summary of the greatest selling book of all time, the Bible.
It is incorrect to suggest that television completely overshadowed and replaced the influence of books on people. There are instances which books are a preferred form of communication medium over the television set. In academic fields, television can not deliver the preciseness and accuracy of a printed scienctific journal. Printed media such as books tend to have greater influence on people when preciseness and accurancy is required.
The increased influence of the television over books can be attributed to the acessibility and ease of use of a television set. To understand the cotent delivered by televisions, simply turn on the power and pay attention; whereas understanding a novel's content requires literacy and critical anlysis of the material being read. A wider demographic can access the television's content. The increased accessiblity allows television to have a greater influence than books.However, if our population increased its literacy rate, printed media's influence on people should increase.