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Score: 5.5/6 -As a quarky physics note, I believe that a rope is much stronger than the sum of its threads :) -Great opening paragraph. Good definitions, very concise, good example that fit your argument. -Again, a fantastic supporting paragraph. Great example and I love that you relate your example back to the argument! -Resolution is good. I would have liked to have one sentence that says your resolution principle before you state talking about your examples -Your essay could use a better transition between paragraphs. eniedra wrote: It is often said that a rope is only as strong as the sum of its threads. The same can also be said for democracy. The fundamental principle of democracy is that of equal representation, and so no politician has absolute power to effectively fullfill his goals without the will of the public behind him. Without public support, government officials cannot be elected, and even upon election, it is the intention of the democratic structure that very little can be done without widespread consensus. This is typefied by the outcome of the Separatist debate that raged in Canada in the late 1980s and early 1990s. The Bloc Quebecois, a then-influential provincial party in Quebec, advocated strongly for separation of the province and independence from Canada. However, in accordance with stable democracy, the government could not allow such action without first consulting the people. A referendum was held on the subject, in which 51% of participants voted against separation. Quebec remained a province of Canada, and the members of the Bloc were unable to be effective in their goals due to a lack of public support.
In 1945, the United States dropped two atomic bombs on the cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, Japan. The decision, a result of years of secret government research and costing hundreds of thousands Japanese civilian lives, had instantaneous and immeasurably large effects on the entire world. Still, it cannot be said that the administration responsible for the move had the pre-determined and whole-hearted acceptance of the public. The classified nature of the project prevented public consultation on the matter, and the horrific loss of lives makes it doubtful that widespread public approval could have been achieved had it been sought. Nevertheless, it is undeniable that the politicians behind the atomic bomb were effective in achieving their goals. World War II, the bloodiest war ever fought on earth, was put to a quick and effective end, and the United States was established as an extremely powerful and advanced military force. In this case, politicians achieved effectiveness without requiring public support.
Most modern societies are founded on strong democratic principles, and these principles require that under stable circumstances, public acceptance is a prerequisite for political effectiveness. This is was demonstrated clearly by Separatist Referendum in Quebec, where the politicians of the Bloc Quebecois were ineffective in their goals due to a lack of public consensus. Still, in times of unprecedented difficulty, such as war, extreme measures must sometimes by taken without public consensus. As was the case with the atomic bombs in 1945, such measures can still be hugely effective, even when the opinion of the public has not been sought or won. It can then be said that although public acceptance always helps a politician be effective in peacetime, in times of war extenuating circumstances allow him to act through judgement alone.
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